Something short and silly perhaps. In case you're wondering, it's March 3rd. Ugh.As my birthday has found me,
yet again,
despite my best efforts
to elude
I suppose it is time
more than
time to concede that it wants
to know
me better than I have allowed
in all those
years at the bottom of these salty
oceans
where I find myself.
2 comments:
Interesting... I like the flow, the feel. The ending feels a bit cryptic to me, the bit about the bottoms of salty oceans... puts me in mind of oceans of tears, mourning the passing of time.
Over all I enjoy this one quite a bit. :)
Man, does this ever hit home.
I don’t see this as “oceans of tears” so much as I do a drowning of sorts (?)
“…better than I have allowed
in all those
years at the bottom of these salty
oceans
where I find myself.”
Nicely written.
- Steve
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