Friday, December 1, 2006

Tributary

I am a little creek
that winds quickly
down from the mountains.

Downstream is the San Joaquin,
the river that nourished
the land in the days
of old.

Seamlessly I flow
into that river,
that great river
that wanders so slow
through the valley.

You. You are my river,
my San Joaquin.
You absorb me,
a glove on the hand,
magnet and iron,
the part--

that makes the whole.

My question is thus:
Would you still flow
along and nourish
the land without
my humble, tributary
contribution?

2 comments:

Eve said...

I love this piece, and though the question in the end might have been presented more subtly, it is a profound question.

I fight the temptation to rewrite, it is indeed a very evocative piece.

Samuel Bivins said...

Glad you like this one--it's honestly not one of my favorites, so I'm glad it has some value. Feel free to rewrite anything I write and post it on here. PB does that a lot, and it's incredibly helpful.

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